What do you think about my poem? - poems about nail polish
   What do you think of my poem? 
 I wrote a poem for my poetry workshop for free class at the university. What do you think ... Constructive criticism is welcome ...:) 
 Cutex 
 A bottle of thinner sitting on the table beside me. 
 I see from time to time. 
 I wonder why I have not moved. 
 After having my chip on my pink nail polish 
 decided that require 
 You may want to remove the ugly bit bright paint. 
 Maybe I like to chip my nail polish. 
 It is to do something to me 
 to focus on something. 
 It gives me pleasure, even if only for a few seconds. 
 It is a habit, while a stranger 
 I do not think I can leave nailspainted. 
 I paint, but only bits and pieces, the color in a few hours. 
 The bottle with pink liquid will sit at this table until I decide to move. 
 I think there's no hurry. 
 Maybe I'll paint the nails 
 Attempt to break the habit. 
 Perhaps I will remove the color with the clear liquid, 
 so if you asked, I can say that 
 I do not know, such as acetone dissolves the enamel   
Sunday, February 14, 2010
Poems About Nail Polish What Do You Think About My Poem?
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2 comments:
to be honest .... I'm not really sure I like
WOW ... It was fantastic. Is it the words.
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